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Strawberrygirlie
✨black girl magic✨
Likes: mob psycho 100, my little pony, adventure time, black clover, toilet bound Hanako,
Dislikes: bad people, gore, gross stuff, feral porn, illegal stuff,
I’m an anime furry artist who likes to yap and make up stories about my oc

Age 18, Female

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Hot girl summer

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Posted by Strawberrygirlie - 5 hours ago


This is Ava by the way

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Furry-/Anthro-anatomy is not my area of expertise, but:
- her right upper leg looks too short to me
- her left breast should be flattened by her arm pose a little bit more
- the... the "line indicating where her left upper leg sits before her lower torso" should be higher and shorter and a pointing a few degrees higher

Overall the piece looks good though. I really mean it. Her tail in particular is really cute and her breasts go nicely with her built.

Thank you! And could you send me a visual of what you mean about the legs and the breast part?

@Strawberrygirlie ...Erm... Please do not take this the wrong way: "No, I could not." Let me explain: I know a bit of theory and I know how things are "supposed to look" but I am almost completely unskilled in regards to actually drawing something that's in my mind. I just made "an attempt" to draw rough approximations into your drawing. To put it as directly as I am with others: "I would DIE OF _SHAME_ if another person saw what I just did to your outline!"

Unfortunately, I cannot explain it much better because of my limited vocabulary in this regard (English isn't my first language), but I'll try:
- Compared with her left leg, and even taking perspective into account, I would expect her right upper leg to be "bigger"/longer. If her knee was a bit further from her butt, then both legs would look more as if they had equal length.
- To demonstrate what I meant about her breast, put your own right hand on your left breast, then gradually raise your left upper arm. You will notice that your left breast will gradually feel "flatter" the more you lift your arm. And her arm is raise pretty high.
- What I mean by the "line indicating where her left upper leg sits before her lower torso": Two lines come from her 'special place' and feather out. One of them is the one from the aforementioned knee. That one is fine. The other one should be shorter as well as a few degrees closer to an (imagined) horizontal line. (It indicates where her skin/fur folds. Which should not be 'as' pronounced and should be located closer to her navel).